Pakistan Burn Victims Turn Beauticians

"Pakistan Burn Victims Turn Beauticians' is about two poor women who had damage their faces because of acid attacks or fire from others who live out their lives as beautifully as beauticians trying to help other victims in Pakistan. I think the story was about how true beauty is from the heart. I think the article was written with good ideas. The writer had a clear focus of writing about the life story of two victims who became beauticians. The story gave many small details about the story and they all connect into one central theme. Like details about the girl with no face, and how many people asked for help for being poured acid in the face, it all connected to the theme. The writer did not give us massive amounts of details to make us bored, but just gave some that specific and supportive to the story and that helps grabbing the readers intrest.